Ashleigh Brown

I still love it and can't wait to read some more

I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this...I stumbled on it and now I love it. You have to message me if you post some more...keep ...

OMG!! i LOVED IT SOOOOO MUCH:)

I AM LOVING THE SUSPENSE....:)

I loved this chapter but I didn't understand when you said that the guys came back...shouldn't Gary be back if the others are back...other than this and some spelling errors ...

I am am like addicted to this story...its great can't wait for more!

I agree with LisaMcooper. Keep up the good work!!

Thanks for the points! I still love your story of course, but I felt like this was kind of rushed because it switches scenes so fast a couple times. Maybe ...

Hi its me again and I read the rest of the story that you added, which is still great. I read them together and only saw one mistake that jumped ...

Thank You for reading and reviewing. I am going to go fix all those errors.

Hi I am sending a query letter and I would like to know if this was suspenseful and worth your time...Hurt my feelings if you have to...I know I haven't ...

Wow!! Gosh. That was what i was thinking the whole time. Can he see dead people? Yeah, but I like the way you opened it up, and it didn't begin ...

I really liked this, even though it was not what I expected. I expected it to be like a six people lover affair...what was I thinking. Lol. Even though I ...

Hi...this is my fist time reading some of you work, and I enjoyed it. I went back and read the 1st and 2nd one, then this. I really like the ...

I agree with Ashes, I really did not expect him to do that. Anyway I really liked it, and i never lost interest, so that's good. Keep it up...